Hey Hagens,
Your website is pretty good. Fantastic if you consider it was done in Notepad!
Shopping website are extemely competitive and its difficult to get top rankings soon.
Getting quality backlinks is key, but not so easy. You have to get creative. I wish I had some advice but I've failed miserable in that department. Nonetheless, my pages have top rankings on MSN and Yahoo. I think the Google aging delay is holding me back there.
One thing to consider: your keywords shouldn't exceed 3-5% of the total words on each page. I'm not sure if what I found is the correct keywords in your page: "High-quality fishing tackle" or "fishing tackle"? Might add that one or two more times on the main page.
One thing you could really benefit from is some marketing writing. Increased Web sales should be your goal, not just getting more hits. The first paragraph should describe the site (and often the first 60 or so words is the most important to obtain better rankings). You have to be brief and to the point to turn web surfers into buyers. That is, you need to earn a reputation and the visits you receive may be more fruitful. They say 5 visitors who all are turned into buyers is better than 100 visitors that don't buy a thing.
I went ahead and took the text from your site and moved some paragraphs around as well as made it leaner. You can take it or leave it, but it's just a suggestion. And hey, it would have cost you $100 to have this done. Finally, so you know, I'm a technical writer by trade. 7 years experience. Often I'm asked to write marketing literature, too, but I like the technical stuff better
For example:
"Welcome to Hagen's, your reliable fishing component and rod source. We specialize in high-quality fishing tackle components, fishing rods, and custom orders. Everything is made at our facility to ensure top-quality products at prices you can afford.
Request one of our catalogs for the latest pricing and selection.
Our Marine catalog is full of high quality marine products, such as <provide some examples here>
Our Fishing Rods catalog features our handcrafted Hagen's rods, built using only the finest quality components.
Our Fishing Tackle Components catalog features the widest selection available. It is filled with quality fishing lures, casting spoons, hooks, jigs, floats, spinner blades, buzz blades, and much more!
Stop by often and check out our 'Whats New' page to see how we expand our fishing tackle product line every day.
Hagen's guarantees 100% customer satisfaction. If you have any questions, comments, or don't see what you're looking for in our catalogs, then call or e-mail us! We might be able to come up with a better solution for you!
THANK YOU FOR CHOOSING HAGEN'S"
Well, there has been plenty of other excellent advice, so I'll leave it with that.
Scott
http://www.bigmallrat.com